I have read through the rule book. Most of the issues I have found have already been mentioned; but I wanted to stress a couple of points.
Firstly, having the 2 pages as a single page format in the document meant this was almost impossible to read on my device. I couldn't just put a page on the screen and just scan through it. Not reading it on a Landscape monitor was frustrating.
Secondly, I tried using a screen reader on this, and it was awful; partly because of the double page format where it would read the top of a page, then the top of the next page, then lower on the first page, then lower on the next page, then back a page... I had no idea what to do. This makes this much harder for anyone who uses a screen reader to assist with their vision impairment, which includes quite a few board gamers.
If you could fix the above issues, but also make this document a single page format rather than a double page format I think that would help more than me and my group.